by Bridgette
This is really good. I can definitely relate to it. The only advice I have to give you is to maybe break it up a bit to give it some structure. Put it in stanzas according to the flow. But I love the emotions behind it. Great job on this. 5/5 |
by Hope
Good job on this poem. |
I really like this peom because one you are great at putting so my emotions into words. It's crazy. And Second, the lines "I brought this upon myself.. |