Wow! I like it! 5!

Man that was really good!!!!

Well done! I really enjoy this. It's so unique from the beginning to the end and all the way back to the eye catching title.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

You know how hard it is to read this and not go by the tempo/song of the kid's song?? Sadly, it all fits it too, which is totally distracting from the meaning of the poem :P lol

I actually like that it fits into that rhythm. i just wouldn't have wanted to be sung that when i was a kid ; )

Thank you for entering my contest but i don't think the poem really fit the topic, but it is a good poem so keep writing and again thank you for entering my contest