by Chris Jul 10, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Why do we hold on for dear life? |
by Tara Kay
A little long, but brillaint! It really caught my eye and made me want to keep reading, it was absolutely awesome! |
by not a poet
We all wish for hope and we all try to not let go.... |
I really liked this one. It flowed really well. It held my attention too. I don't really have very much to say about this poem. It was really good. Lol. That's all I can think of. Keep it up! |
by Darien
Throught the poem you used the word "were" when you really should be using "we're" with an apostrophe. It breaks the word into 'we are' rather than being the past tense of 'be'. That's all I can read. Other than that, it was a great write. |
Hm... You have real talent. You grabbed me with your writing and got me hooked, haha. But really, you are so good. Never stop writing! |