Push me

I like the way the title fits in with the poem, without actually being in the poem. Nice work. I often wonder why I change so much myself, and this poem seemed to 'push me' that little further into understanding. My thanks.

Peace. [Sole]

You know, i loved the poem, but what i dont know is why you should change yourself, you are you, and that you should be proud of.
but apart from that well done
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Thats it? I was all into the poem and than it just stopped! haha. That means I liked it but it just was short. Great job, I liked this one mucho

I think the second stanza is my favorite, I can totally relate to that one. It reminds me about my mom, and how I want to be the perfect daughter, but sometimes it's hard. And sometimes I don't think I can't make it, and sometimes I don't know if it's worth it.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

Aww.. this poem is so sad and heartfelt. I love the flow and the meaning behind it, but you shouldn't change for people. I dont know who you're talking about, but they should love you for who you are :) but this is a great poem, I loved it! 5/5