Very very nicely written.

i enjoyed reading this immensely. the 3rd stanza was my favourite.

nice work. u got my vote! lol

Amazing Poem, Although The Actual Meaning Was a little Fuzzy. it Was Still Powerfully Written, The only Thing i Dont Like That Much Is The Inconsistant Rhyme Scheme..

xLaurenx

Nelle -- I can really relate to this. In my opinion, the first stanza was really really good =D
Just saw you had a new poem, thought I`d r/r/c it =D But it was a really good poem, keep it up. 5/5

Samantha Hollywood