Suicide Attempt

by ShatteredGirl   Jul 11, 2006


They took me away,
Away from my mum,
Away from my home,

They said it was dangerous.
And that I almost died.
"What's your point?
I thought... who cares?

Everything was taken
From me in a second
My freedom, my family.

I was in a jail
No way to escape
I was told what to do

It was awful
I would cry myself to sleep
Every night I spent there

It tortured me when mum left
I didn't want to let her go
It was like she was
Leaving me forever

No one believed me
I was fine I promised
I wont do it again
I said as I cried

Just let me go home
Days passed n I was
Still locked up

I was locked up
In a place for the insane
A place I didn't belong

In the end I realised
I did belong there
I put my life in risk
I almost destroyed my family
How could I do that?

It broke me in half
To see what almost happened
I was ready to take
My life away from everyone

I got help and I saw
How dangerous it was
What I had done

I've changed so much
I changed for the better
I'm the new me

And I love it!

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  • Thats the best poem i have ever heard

  • 18 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Aw, so sad!
    I could relate, I know how it is to feel this way... it is not a fun time in life, but I believe that yu have the strngth to prevail. Gah, I'm sounding so cliche right now, but please, don't hurt anymore! You have a wonderful talent with poetry. You could go places with it!

    Love,
    Tina
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  • 18 years ago

    by PoetInDisguise

    O shutup, you will live
    stop complaining

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