by Sweet lig Jul 11, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
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Another good poem, but those grammatical errors make it look a bit bad. It's still good cause it's about friendship. Great job. 4/5 |
by Kaila
Good job |
by Jenni Marie
I think you have done better, but it is still good. |
by David
I think you have a very unique writing style. 5/5. Comment / Rate back most recent please. |
by Misstress
I like it! |