Creature

by Wings Of Flames   Jul 11, 2006


Cats crawling up his arms,
Tattoos smudged to age,
A curling sneer across his face,
A sight left to plague,

Trust forgotten left to die,
I cannot breathe again,
Blood splattered on the sheet,
To wash away the rain,

Obscenely putrid dents,
This soul shall never mend,
Hands carved by Satan,
Hooked blades for he did lend,

Thus he is no act of God,
Sin forever more,
Tainting forgotten twists,
Cover the swelling sore,

Erase pasts abduction,
Forget the world has gone,
Your wrists are not a canvas,
And the pink is not the dawn,

It's blackening each to pass,
For the future holds no light,
Days push, For I pull,
Through every strand of white.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Amazing imagery!! Wow- I don't know how you do it! Your poems are bonechilling!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very interesting poem. Nice use of words. In some spots, the rhythm is rough.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, what graphic imagery! That was really good I liked the details you put into this. It was intense to read with every word. You really did create a 'Creature'.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShAtTeReD HeArT

    A very strong and discripted poem wrote a story with pictures in my head... i no this may not be the best comment but im not good at them^^
    darkest angel

  • 18 years ago

    by ShAtTeReD HeArT

    A very strong and discripted poem wrote a story with pictures in my head... i no this may not be the best comment but im not good at them^^
    darkest angel

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