Hmmm, ooooohhhh, aaahhhhh.

Lol. you know i love all ur poems Moo Moo, and this is no exception. absolutely beautifully evil. creepy that i was slightly turned on by that poem. LOL

i liked the second last stanza best, it made most sense : D talk to you soon Em!

keep writing, love, i live for it : D lol

-Suzie

This was very deep. The flow and the expression you are sending to the reader is really heavy. I can just image somone telling this poem aloud. Great job!

Very skilful use of language and by no means deserve the 1 somoene voted. I got a bit lost towards the end but you certainly built the image at the beginning, to the point I could swear I could taste them. Keep it up, I like your style.

A very strong and discripted poem wrote a story with pictures in my head... i no this may not be the best comment but im not good at them^^
darkest angel

A very strong and discripted poem wrote a story with pictures in my head... i no this may not be the best comment but im not good at them^^
darkest angel

Wow, what graphic imagery! That was really good I liked the details you put into this. It was intense to read with every word. You really did create a 'Creature'.

Very interesting poem. Nice use of words. In some spots, the rhythm is rough.

Amazing imagery!! Wow- I don't know how you do it! Your poems are bonechilling!! 5/5