by BrokenMisery Jul 11, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
All the angels ignore my howling plead, |
The ending was different than what I expected it to be. And I loved that, I like predicting and ending and being totally wrong but still completely taken away by the ending that is actually there. Keep it up! 5/5 =] |
by LadyPearl
Absolutely Love it! Perfect ending! |
by N J Thornton
I'm not familiar with the poetry form so I've followed your instructions to how it should be set out. I don't know if I've miss counted but line one and line eight don't seem to follow the syllable rule. |