I'm not sure what to say, great poem yes i just hope its not what i'm really thinking, and i hope u know that something like this will affect many ppl i know for sure it will affact me xox sam

You are a truly gifted writer. The art of your words cut through the barrier of thoughts that say this is just another teenager with a keyboard and free time. You can go places with your talent. The only thing I would suggest is to choose words and phrases that would make you poem flow better. To achieve this, after writing the poem read it a loud and see if there are any awkward places. It is amazing though!

Good poem hun, its making me thign now and i was told i shouldnt think hmmmm i hope your alright hmm
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Wow, such a sad/dark poem. Very well written though. The last stanza was really good, gave me full visual image in my head. Excellent job. Keep it up, and thanks for your comment. 5/5

Natalie``