Bad Day (diary of abuse)

by BrokenMisery   Jul 11, 2006


Sitting here for hours, a broken disgrace.
Bottle in one hand, a glass in the other,
Ripped flesh hiding her face in ruins.
With twisted knuckles
Beat upon her skin.
She's pathetic.
Isolated.
Ruined...
...At least that's what he said.

She promised herself, it was only today
Just one bad day.
Until it happened
Again,
And again,
And again.
One day her heart stopped beating,
She lost that hope
Lost love
One day her tears didn't do enough.

The sweet smell of wine drowned her thoughts,
Until it was on his breath.

No doctor can cure the incurable,
No psychiatrist can heal scars.
But a rope can do more than both of them.

She told herself;
Today was the last bad day
That was the last time he'd rip away her skin
The last time he'd tell her how hopeless she was.

Hanging there for hours, a broken disgrace.
A rope from the ceiling,
Made from everything he ever did
Today, was her last bad day.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Suchapoetictradgedy

    I love this one! I could feel the pain and the emotion! Keep up the good writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    I dont think people understand just how much abuse can affect a person and no matter how much you tell yourself its just one more day or how much you drink until you black out. It doesnt matter because it happened and when you wake-up in the morning it's still there..scars dont go away.
    you wrote about the pain so well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow---this is so deep and powerful. Very well written! The flow is perfect-This is so sad and I like the format of the poem and the way you worded it-Great job-I love it! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Caitlin --
    Great job here! Again, the details you used expressed a lot of emotion and I could picture the entire thing. The flow throughout the poem was perfect, I think you`re a talented writer. I`m not sure of your age, but you seem to know what you`re doing. =D
    5/5

    Love much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    Oh that was so sad but it had great imagry it was awesome good job 5/5

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