by jessel jane Jul 11, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I looked straight into her eyes... |
by Simon Hayes
Dark and compelling piece. The way you've used your words to express what you see is wonderfully done. The ending seemed so doubtful, but you've ended it perfectly. The flow was great, the rhyming impeccable. A great piece! Thanks for directing me to these. |