by Lost & Delirious Jul 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Last night I knew you were watching over me, |
Wow, this poem is so beautifully written! Every stanza has great flow and wording, ant the whole piece is flawless. I admire your writing skills! |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this one is another one of your great poems! |
by Megann Lee
Wonderful. I like it, very creative, and the word strutore was amazing, can't help but want to read it again and again. |
by skyla
This is a really good poem..i like how u used ur words. they explain everything excellent job i love it |
by Jessica
Awww.. keep your chin up hun.. this was so sadd.. the emotion was clear and strong.. it flowed pretty well and i like the idea of colour representing your mood.. |