I really liked this, but i wasn't really sure what it was about. But that doesnt really matter, cause it flowed really well and the rhymes were perfect I loved this line "I was ashamed, but you weren't judging me," |
Strong Metaphors, Beautifuly Written And Formated...5.0 All The Way |
by Ruth
Wow, I think this poem is really deep, I like it a lot... It's hard to me sometimes to write my feelings but you did it very well... |
Wow. Such a sad poem. Very well written though. The emotions were conveyed so well. You also used excellent choice of wording. It was amazing. Keep it up, and thank you for your kind words on my poem. =) 5/5 |
Very excellent poem. Strong and deliberate and a -wonderful- topic. Very orginal. Great job. |
by Jessica
Awww.. keep your chin up hun.. this was so sadd.. the emotion was clear and strong.. it flowed pretty well and i like the idea of colour representing your mood.. |
by skyla
This is a really good poem..i like how u used ur words. they explain everything excellent job i love it |
by Megann Lee
Wonderful. I like it, very creative, and the word strutore was amazing, can't help but want to read it again and again. |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this one is another one of your great poems! |
Wow, this poem is so beautifully written! Every stanza has great flow and wording, ant the whole piece is flawless. I admire your writing skills! |