Wow this a ia great poem its like u captured all the emotions of transforming from a girl to a women... nice!!
5/5

Aw wow! That was really good and really sweet. Loved the two ending lines. They really brought the poem together. It was a beautiful write. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Aww! That's cute! I loved it! I liked the flow, and this time, the word weren't that hard to follow >.< Great write! Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Excellent poem. Very nice and sweet! 5/5 You write so beautifully :)