Chris --
This was great! Short, but great. The theme was definitely correct, and the flow was perfect. The rhymes were kind of simple, but what`s wrong with that?
5/5

Samantha Hollywood

Flow...good. Words...simple and to the point. Length...short yet contains a lot. Overall it had been a short piece that was really good though there was a problem in the middle with the flow it still came out nice.
~Faith-less

Another excellent inspirational poem!! I loved it!! 5/5