JACK AND JILL

by yungin   Jul 11, 2006


Jack and jill
crawled up the hill
to collect a pale of sperm
jack rolled down and broke his spine
wishing jill would be behind him to make everything fine
but she ran away
and wont be back today
so jack laid there and cried
as he slowly died inside :D

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haha i know this isnt funnie but i tried:P critisize it all u want i wont hold a grudge:D

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nada

    Haha funny at 1st, look i made it better =P lmao

    Jack and jill
    crawled up the hill
    to collect a pale of sperm
    Jack tumbled down and broke his hind
    Never once was able to stand upright
    He could not have sex
    He was in such a mess
    Jill felt sad and ran back
    so jack laid there and cried
    as he slowly died inside :D
    Now he cant fck his b^tch upright

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Hmm,,, it was funny in the beggining :)

  • 18 years ago

    by xxpinkxxribbonsxx

    By the way it was sooooo funny ^^pickle^^

  • 18 years ago

    by xxpinkxxribbonsxx

    WOW! that was good

    keep up the good work mate

    ^^PICKLE^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Raydeen

    Lmao I effin love it! old Jack and Jill. see now I DONT have any more poems to comment on. gosh =p.

    Ray

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