BEST POEM EVER! FUNNIEST=) lol keep it up hommieee
-sandy-

Lmao I effin love it! old Jack and Jill. see now I DONT have any more poems to comment on. gosh =p.

Ray

WOW! that was good

keep up the good work mate

^^PICKLE^^

By the way it was sooooo funny ^^pickle^^

Hmm,,, it was funny in the beggining :)

Haha funny at 1st, look i made it better =P lmao

Jack and jill
crawled up the hill
to collect a pale of sperm
Jack tumbled down and broke his hind
Never once was able to stand upright
He could not have sex
He was in such a mess
Jill felt sad and ran back
so jack laid there and cried
as he slowly died inside :D
Now he cant fck his b^tch upright