Society

by Chris   Jul 11, 2006


I stand for what I say is right.
because theres nothing more real to me
Our opinions contrast like the day and night.
an artist is such a relief to be.

our visions are molded to what we see
because they don't want it any other way
living strong while were just dieing to be
what they always seem to say...

is there really a standard to live our live's
or do they just want us to struggle
can we ever do what we think is right
or are we stuck searching through this rubble

I can't find a real reason
so I guess its left to burn
for what I believe in
theres too much they would have to learn.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme.

    The only problem was
    "is there really a standard to live our life's"
    [It would be more correct to write 'lives']

    A really good poem though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    I completly agree with the message the poem sent. And I think it had a very good flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A totaly agree with this poem.nice job