Short and sweet. your rhyming was perfect (expet for found and wound. although similar speeling, when read aloud they seem to clash) , and flowed seemlesly. exellent.

I think you've missed the point: there are two different pronunciations of "wound" and both are specified here with their rhyme!

It sounded beautiful when i read but i had to jeep reading it to understand it. i loved "but romance is fleeting; although passion worked hard, Whether simple picked flowers, cherished words on a card,"
great poem!

Very nice Ed. short and simple. effective and elegant.

First rhyming poem I've actually enjoyed in a while. You've crafted this beautifully, I absolutely love the way you change the word "soulwound" based on the rhyme, that was immaculate. I feel kind of bad giving straight praise without suggestions... but I hope pointing out what's so amazing will help you out too.

You really excel at love poems, Ed. A great and inspiring read as always.

Sleepy x