The repeating of " it hurts so bad" is really strong. and as the reader I can say it is very emotional but very good 5/5

God Bless

-chris

Heather --
I think this poem was short and repetitive, but it was good. I liked how all the lines that didn`t repeat rhymed, that added a nice twist and made it more attention grasping. overall, great job. 4/5

Samantha Hollywood

Simple, yet deep. An interesting write.
Keep on writing!

Aw, i'm sorry for your pain, this is so sad. I was a good poem, everything rhymed and it really shows creativitiy that you could find so many thingd you rhyme with "everyday" Great work on this one.

--Steph

Very sad but i think the repetativeness got a little too much and the lines in between could be more deep and meaningful as far as the image you ere trying to put across. I also think "anyways" should be "anyway". A very emotional poem, a good job and keep writing. 4/5

I liked the repitition of it. I thought you could say this though "And it hurts me so bad" I dunno. Just a suggestion. It was a sad poem though. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Dude i can sooo relate this is rly good i rly like it 5/5

The repition worked very well, and i loved every line of this poem, keep writing, you have some good talent there
xxxxxxx