Hey, thanks for reading another of me poems and i'm glad you 'kinda liked it'. High Praise! It made my day!

I can't say that i like this one as much as some of your other, but that's probably becasue the ones that i've read have been amazing. I don't think thatv this one has as much backbone to it. Not that i don't like it but i don't think it's one of your strongest. I really like the 'now we're over and you still wanna fight' . that's a good line!
I tried to make that sound constructive. i don't know whether i managed it but well it was meant to be.
Jemma