by Samantha Hollywood Jul 11, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
[verse 1] |
by Biscuit
Great song, i want to hear it, can u sing it to me :P im sure it would be wonderful, although the 1st first doesnt really fit with the structure of the others... |
This song is very touching, in ways. Although I really didn't like how the flow had gone, others might. I didn't really like the repeating of some of the verse where it has it in the next line, in the same sentence. |
by Sole
I loved reading this song. The lyrics were good, but not too intense, which is good once in a while. I would love to hear this song with a tune, I can picture how gerat it would sound in my mind. Well written. |
The words of the song were good, if i were you i would use more descriptive words, it seemed pretty plain!!! Its hard to judge a song with out music like hAwAiiZaNgEl said. I could see it becoming a song later in life!!!! It was EXCELLENT for your age!!! I have always wanted to write a song but i dot have enough talent to!! So i admire you for being able to!! The flow of the song was GREAT!! Overall i would give it a 5/5!! Keep it up!! |
by nikki
This is wonderful the lyrics are so good. it feels like it could rly be a song i rly like it good job 5/5 |