Comments : My boyfriend, my best friend

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Wow, This was great!! You`re doing great with writing, keep it up. The flow and rythem of this poem was perfect. No complaints. =D 5/5

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    I think you need to work on your puncuation in some words in here. Other than that I still had some trouble with flow but like I said before you have room to improve but its still good.
    Keep writing!
    Juls

  • I Know You Guys Are Lucky To Have One Another! One Of My Best Relationships Was With My Bestfriend Of 8 Years..*Wishing You & Him The Best Of Luck* He Must Be Really Special For You To Write a Poem Like This Where You Pour All Your Heart Out
    5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Another totally brilliant poem, i love all your work, it is really beautiful and unique, keep it up, my friend
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by EVIL_TEASE

    I liked it and prode someone found love to be that kind to stay that long!

  • 18 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    I love this poem i can relate... i used to write poems like this but then my bf started to lose intrest in me but then after i was mad at him he realized wut his life would be like w/o me and he wellya we r still togerther lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I didnt particualarly like this one.
    There was no flow in the words.
    And some word use could have been better.
    But if you love this person then it shouldnt amtter what i think.
    as long as its important to you.
    ~Emah

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    Wow....I liked this poem :-) It made me smile because even though girls have boyfriends now a days, its hard to consider them as your best friend as bad as that sounds....Great write, I'm glad you have someone like that!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Aww. Sweet poem. That made me feel happy inside, I'm guessing the poems true, it seems to come from the heart, and I'm happy for you if it is. A beautiful poem, a joy to read and a spirit-lifting write, which reminds me of my friends that seem as close as this. Life isn't always bad.

    Peace. [Sole]