Wow, This was great!! You`re doing great with writing, keep it up. The flow and rythem of this poem was perfect. No complaints. =D 5/5 |
by Juls
I think you need to work on your puncuation in some words in here. Other than that I still had some trouble with flow but like I said before you have room to improve but its still good. |
I Know You Guys Are Lucky To Have One Another! One Of My Best Relationships Was With My Bestfriend Of 8 Years..*Wishing You & Him The Best Of Luck* He Must Be Really Special For You To Write a Poem Like This Where You Pour All Your Heart Out |
by Tara Kay
Another totally brilliant poem, i love all your work, it is really beautiful and unique, keep it up, my friend |
by EVIL_TEASE
I liked it and prode someone found love to be that kind to stay that long! |
I love this poem i can relate... i used to write poems like this but then my bf started to lose intrest in me but then after i was mad at him he realized wut his life would be like w/o me and he wellya we r still togerther lol |
I didnt particualarly like this one. |
by Krissey
Wow....I liked this poem :-) It made me smile because even though girls have boyfriends now a days, its hard to consider them as your best friend as bad as that sounds....Great write, I'm glad you have someone like that! |
by Sole
Aww. Sweet poem. That made me feel happy inside, I'm guessing the poems true, it seems to come from the heart, and I'm happy for you if it is. A beautiful poem, a joy to read and a spirit-lifting write, which reminds me of my friends that seem as close as this. Life isn't always bad. |