Short and et herm... sweet...?

^^pickle^^

Wow in this short poem it shows ur strong emotions toward someone..... its really raw but deep gd work!!keep it up!

Again, Very nice Senyru. You're a great writer. Don't ever stop.

This was fantastic. Not much else to say. Keep up the great work. =) 5/5

Natalie``

Wow, I am so amazed that you can say so much in just 3 words.

For it being so short It was amazing...It was filled with Lots of anger and emotions...It was very well written...It was beautiful! i loved itt 5/5