Hey dis was gd...i lykd it...keep up the work! luv dia

Yeah that was deep peachez!! I can totally relate to this poem...I wish I could shout those things at a boy...Anyway, I loved it, very expressive indeed. Keep writing!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

I kno exactly how u feel, cuz i went thru the same thing. it really broke my heart. u wrote ur feelings out on paper perfectly. 5/5! thx 4 commenting on my poem! luv ya!

The slang through out the poem was a bit odd but I got the message, I know it is your style but I think if you read a lot more your vocabulary would improve a great deal Plot121