Black Ink

by smiles♥   Jul 11, 2006


Closing her eyes
her heart beat slows,
her grip loosens,
she slowly goes.

Her last moments,
tears run down here cheek.
Her eyes blacken.
She grows more week.

On her note,
it simply says "Goodbye."
Scribbled in black ink.
"And today is the day I die."

Across her wrists,
pain written in scars.
They never fade.
Everything goes dark.

Her last breath.
She lays on the floor.
Her eyes close.
Then her parents walk in the door.

*Sirens*

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  • 18 years ago

    by ENTROPY

    Wow, great job!, i like the rhyme scheme. thanks for the comment
    mollyjade

  • 18 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    WOW IT IS REALLY GOOD.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy F

    This is so sad.
    I absolutely love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by *heidi;

    Holy hell!it was....just wicked great!i loved it!awesome work.see some of mine please.ttyl
    :~:heidi:~:

  • 18 years ago

    by Sam

    Very good this one stung my heart i like how u put the siren thingy at the end 5/5