Aww this is really sad but its really good 5/5 good job keep writing

Very good this one stung my heart i like how u put the siren thingy at the end 5/5

Holy hell!it was....just wicked great!i loved it!awesome work.see some of mine please.ttyl
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This is so sad.
I absolutely love it!

WOW IT IS REALLY GOOD.

Wow, great job!, i like the rhyme scheme. thanks for the comment
mollyjade