Rag Doll

by Kara !   Jul 11, 2006


Milky skin and rosy cheeks
My body's made of buttons and seams
Stitching holds my limbs on tight
But without a brain I'm incomplete

Thick brown yarn twisted into plaits
Dressed in clothes of rags and tats
The feel of cotton for my flesh
Yet with no bones I lay down flat

Heart shaped lips painted red
And fiberfill stuffed in my head
Vacant black holes dotted for eyes
But missing a heart, I'm as good as dead

Useless, unnecessary, I'm not real
'Cause like a rag doll is how I feel

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  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Very nice poem, I really enjoyed it. You have a wonderful talent

  • 18 years ago

    by FAKE-is-the-new-trend

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    This is very original im glad you don't floow the crowd and write the same old 'lost love poetry'
    doesnt appeal to me.
    but this was excellent.
    ~Emah

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Wow, i love the idea of this poem!! It was so unique!! How do you think of this stuff??? Your an amazing writer!!! I loved the first stanza

    Milky skin and rosy cheeks
    My body's made of buttons and seams
    Stitching holds my limbs on tight
    But without a brain I'm incomplete

    Well done, i also liked the words you used!! Awesome!! 5/5!! Keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Useless, unnecessary, I'm not real
    'Cause like a rag doll is how I feel
    [I thought that was a GREAT way to end the poem. And I really liked those two lines so much!]

    You've done an excellent job on this Kara. It was wonderful. You worded everything great and it was different and original. Top shtuff! Tehe. Keep it up!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

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