Really good poem

I like the descriptions, they're very original and well written. I could imagine the rag doll, really sad. =(

I think my favorite stanza was the third one, especially the last line. So true!

"But missing a heart, I'm as good as dead"

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

I enjoy the comparison in this poem. An un-used ragdoll would have a very sad life...

There were a couple of grammatical errors (well, spelling errors) but I'll let you find them, seeing as you're a grammar nazi yourself. :D

I think that it would be great if you now wrote another poem about a child's beloved ragdoll. (Many kids have loved ragdolls, I'm sure.)

Good job overall!

I loved the imagery and I thought it orginal...The third Stanza by far was my favorite....the only thing for me was the first line on the last stanza...I wasn't to crazy for but never the less I gave it a 5/5...great poem

Kara - this was really great! it was different, so it was a nice twist to poetry. it was great!!

samantha hollywood

Hrm... different, but still good!

5/5
ARP

Good write. I like how at the end you brought the metaphor into reality.
You had some good descriptions for the "rag doll."
On the second line it should be "seams."
The third stanza and couplet threw me off slightly with the flow, that's the only real problem I had with this.
Thanks for sharing.

Well, I can honestly say that was different, I haven't really read anything in that type of sequence before, it was very well written and it was just really good!!!

I Love Poetry Like This, With Alot Of Descriptivness & Imagery...I Think Its Very Important In a Poem Because It Paints a Vivid Picture In My Mind, I Enjoyed Every Line Of This...I Keep Re-Reading It To Find Something Wrong...But I'll Just Give Up And Leave It At 5.0! *Wink*
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wow, awesome job! Great descriptions and rhymes. Perfect ending

Useless, unnecessary, I'm not real
'Cause like a rag doll is how I feel
[I thought that was a GREAT way to end the poem. And I really liked those two lines so much!]

You've done an excellent job on this Kara. It was wonderful. You worded everything great and it was different and original. Top shtuff! Tehe. Keep it up!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow, i love the idea of this poem!! It was so unique!! How do you think of this stuff??? Your an amazing writer!!! I loved the first stanza

Milky skin and rosy cheeks
My body's made of buttons and seams
Stitching holds my limbs on tight
But without a brain I'm incomplete

Well done, i also liked the words you used!! Awesome!! 5/5!! Keep it up!!

This is very original im glad you don't floow the crowd and write the same old 'lost love poetry'
doesnt appeal to me.
but this was excellent.
~Emah

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Very nice poem, I really enjoyed it. You have a wonderful talent