Only to find out, I was worse then before
[I felt like you could add another word in that sentence. So you could say "Only to find out that I was worse than before"]
You told me that I have "Reoccurying major depression-severe"
[In this line you said "You" maybe you could say "She" or "He"]
I knew something was wrong with me
But, I had no idea that I would have to get my medicine changed once again
[I thought those lines were great. Mainly because you state that you knew there was something wrong with you. It takes alot of courage to admitt that.]
Once I realize what i'm doing is wrong
Then maybe I will make it right
[I also REALLY liked these lines. I can relate ALOT to those. I loved how you worded it.]
I thought the ending of the poem was strong also.

See, it -wasn't- a bad poem. =P I love it quite alot. And, it made pretty good sense to me. And even though it didn't rhyme, you were expressing your emotions really well. GREAT write hun. =P Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Hey,

Great poem, it really tells me what you've been going through, and it sucks. I hope you get better, remember i love you and you can pm me if you need to talk:)

--Steph