by Silver
Hehe so graphic love that. Very good my lovely friend. |
by donk2ymouth
That was.descriptive, the poem was interesting. It was one of the most descriptive short poems I have ever read, most of the shorter poems aren't well done. The ending was sort of weak, I think you could have used stronger words, but I like the sudden twist to it. Good write. |
Wow. This one was really good I must say. The depth, as in the others, are wonderful. Nicely done! |
by struggling
Sad but its great i love it.Remember I love you and im here you are wonderful and great dont ever 4get that. |