Wow, it really shows what a bad relationship can do to you! Wonderful writing and rhymes!

Love-n-Laughter
Shelby

This is amazing, the rhyme and rhythem o.k shut up wip and get real

this is so emotional, I bet every girl in the universe has had moments like these, a life like this, or they're going to have a life/moment like this. I know I have, and I hated it.

Please don't change, even if this is just a poem not based on you. I love you for you girl. and YOU deserve a guy who will treat you like the queen you are, and you shouldn't have to change for him.

all I can say is that this is achingly beautiful.and I can't let you change anything about it, or yourself.

Awwwwwwwwww omg i love it~ u are still my lover~ britt

Aww. I cried. Oh my gosh. No one can ever make me cry ahh. That was soo good. Aww. Great emotion and depth. Nice work.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 5/5

I'm waiting for the third biatch :] CAUSE. I liked this one. ohyusss :)

Wow they were both amazing. You should be famous :) great job!!

O0o another sad part to the story!! can't wait to read the third installment...
just one minor note in stanza 9 it should be won not one...but don't worry I make mistakes all the time!!

*a whole bunch/5*