Awwww hun that was soo sad..but i can definitely relate to this ALOT! you wrote it beautifully, it expressed tons of emotions and your words really poured through to my heart!! it was great 5/5

Good job. My favorite part was this:

Nothing I do makes sense anymore,
The clock says so anyway,
I feel that I trip and fall,
On my up-hill way.

I added you to my favorites. Excellent job.

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