Role Model Father"

by miss4re   Jul 11, 2006


What makes you so superior?
To me you're a no one, your inferior.
When I was younger I looked up to you,
Now I hate the things you say and do.
You always think that you no best,
Not everyone wants your opinion, give it a rest.

Just about every night we would come home to a fight,
Do you think you raised us well, did you do it right?
There's only so much drama and stress some one can take,
Stop the yelling and arguments for god sake.
You would criticize my work and say it's over done,
You would make me feel useless, did you find that fun?

I hate you for all the times you made me cry,
Sometimes all I wanted to do was die.
Why do you try and bully us around?
All you're doing is driving us into the ground
You tend to push and push and push some more,
You get so in our face all we wanna do is show you the door.

I think of you and I just want to scream,
Don't you see what your doing, we are breaking at the seem.
You're out of control, what are you thinking?
You're making a fool of yourself, I can see you sinking.
I get told; wow you're like your dad,
Is that meant to be a good thing? it just makes me mad.

Take a look at yourself in the mirror, what do you see?
You're meant to see someone you love, how can that be?
You have gone so far now, you can't turn back,
So now our family will always have a major crack.
You have hurt some people quite bad,
Your have intentionally hurt them, that really makes me mad.

You have hurt my mum, your breaking her apart.
This is meant to be someone you hold dear in your heart.
For you I have lost all respect and love.
I want you to disappear into the sky like a dove
I needed a way to tell you how I feel,
I despise the person you have become, that I can say is real.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    I totally understand this poem! you're a great writer! I love your work! keep it up, can you plz comment on mine :) xo

  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Take a look at yourself in the mirror, what do you see?
    You're meant to see someone you love, how can that be?
    You have gone so far now, you can't turn back,
    So now our family will always have a major crack.
    You have hurt some people quite bad,
    Your have intentionally hurt them, that really makes me mad.

    I LOVED THAT STANZA!

    Ahem, I loved this poem! Reminds me of how my dad walks out on the family, brought a tear to me. =) Good work!!

    5/5

    LOVE
    Lolli