Take a look at yourself in the mirror, what do you see?
You're meant to see someone you love, how can that be?
You have gone so far now, you can't turn back,
So now our family will always have a major crack.
You have hurt some people quite bad,
Your have intentionally hurt them, that really makes me mad.

I LOVED THAT STANZA!

Ahem, I loved this poem! Reminds me of how my dad walks out on the family, brought a tear to me. =) Good work!!

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LOVE
Lolli

I totally understand this poem! you're a great writer! I love your work! keep it up, can you plz comment on mine :) xo