The Fallen one

by darkness   Jul 11, 2006


There he goes,Alone and sad.
The fallen Angel.
Thrown out from up above.
The broken black wings,
his light pale face.
he sings.he sings a song,
A song for the dead.
Black robe and broken wings.
his voice is like a thunderstorm.
he is a fallen Angel,
And the fallen Angel is me.
There he goes,
Alone and sad.
The fallen one.
Eyes so dark as night.
With no heart,
Without feelings.
he sings his song,
his song for the dead.
His black robe and broken wings.
He is a doomed one.
A dark Angel,An Angel of death.
A fallen one
,And the fallen Angel is me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ok...I gave it a 4/5.

    The flow wasn't all that terrific, as well asthe thoughts. I thought you tried to cram in too many words in one line, and then not enough in the next one.

    But I did like the idea of you being the fallen angel. That gives lots of emotion just in those words. But I thought you could've also had more emotion throughout the whole piece, instead of just the end. =) 4/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Sam

    I liked the other one better but that means I LOVE THIS ONE! I really loved the other one though! It'll be hard to top it lol :D :)

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    That was so sad it was beautiful.
    nice work.

  • 18 years ago

    by darkness

    Hi

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