Hi

That was so sad it was beautiful.
nice work.

I liked the other one better but that means I LOVE THIS ONE! I really loved the other one though! It'll be hard to top it lol :D :)

Ok...I gave it a 4/5.

The flow wasn't all that terrific, as well asthe thoughts. I thought you tried to cram in too many words in one line, and then not enough in the next one.

But I did like the idea of you being the fallen angel. That gives lots of emotion just in those words. But I thought you could've also had more emotion throughout the whole piece, instead of just the end. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha