Very good poem! 5/5 liked it alot feel free to look at mine.

This is sad yet reallly heart warming lol i loved it 5/5!

God Bless

-Chris

I struggled with the flow of the poem more so in the second to last stanza.
Idk, it wasnt my favorite of your work but you have some room to improve. good job though, just keep working

Juls

"And your faces pops into my mind,"
['face' unless you are talking about more than one person]

This was a really sad poem, and it is as if you brought me into your life, and experience your emotions. This was a good poem, the rhymes were great, and the flow was good. Awesome stuff!

Ugh I Feel This Way With Jeremy All The Time, Its Like You Knew My Situation When You Were Writing This Poem, Only a True Poet Can Touch Those Personal Spots...Your Gifted...I Hope You Know That
*I Luv U Stephy!*
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

That was beautiful, it was sad, but it really touched me and you have so much talent, i believe that you will go far with your woek, keep it up
xxxxx

Hmmm.
not as good as your previous work but its still good.
it doesnt flow as well.
and there's not as much meaning and depth in your words.
~Emah
4/5