First Time < 33

by Tina Carr AKA Snickers   Jul 11, 2006


Right now
Right here
With you
So near
Is exactly where I want to be.

This beautiful music
We compose
As I hold you
So close
Feeling you slowly move into me.

No worries
No strifes
The best time
Of my life
Being with you, my dear.

I am sure of this
Because you are the one
This is being done out of love
Not just for fun
The reasons are so clear.

Loving you more
As time goes by
These moments are breath taking
I cannot deny
For so long I been dreaming of this day.

This by far
Is our best hour
You take your time
But with great power
And I wouldn't want it any other way.

~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~

Haha
There you go MusiciansFinest...
The poem you asked for
I'll write another one tonight
(Don't laugh!)
=p

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  • 18 years ago

    by K

    Nice poem! You hid the good points of love making, the other good points besides the actual love making that is. You told the feelings which most poems lack when people right about making love. Keep up the good work miss, cant wait to read more!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow I love this it is sweet and full of love 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow what a great poen

    I am sure of this
    Because you are the one
    This is being done out of love
    Not just for fun
    The reasons are so clear.

    especially that lines I like that very much simple but deep great one 5/5

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