LOSER

by LockedInEternity   Jul 12, 2006


He has thick framed glasses and red curly hair.
You call him mean names,
And you think he won't care.

The one with freckles,
That cover his face,
So obese that a bathtub would take up less space.

You make him depressed,
But he knows no one cares.
So he sucks it up and ignores all the stares.

You start to feel better by putting him down.
Your lips rise to a smile,
As his lower in frown.

Making fun of him daily,
Not just an abuser.
I bet you didn't know that you're the real LOSER!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Ouuuhhh this is a good one! ya i can relate to this poem when i was little, i was being treated like this! and ya they are the looser :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Ah interesting write.
    something different but so true..
    Ive enjoyed reading this.truly.
    5/5
    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Oh my gosh! I love it! Some of the people I know do the exact same thing every single day they live. I feel horrible for the kids they pick on! Mainly because I used to be among the most popular few, but still. I do feel for them. =(

    The poem, yes. Flow was excellent, topic was well chosen out, and it displayed excellent emotion in it. I'm really sorry if you get picked on by people. I'm here if you need me. ^_^ I know exactly how it feels. =) Great write. 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem is so true! And I'm glad to see a poem that actually stands up for those people. My favorite stanza was:

    You start to feel better by putting him down.
    Your lips rise to a smile,
    As his lower in frown.
    You did a very good job on this. The flow and rhythm was really good and it held up well and I just loved it! 5/5 Keep it up!

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