by RetroRavey Jul 12, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
She died. |
The ending didn't seem to fit that well but it was pretty good. I really like the dark feel to all of your poetry. Also one thing that bothered me is that you wrote C***** which ,sorry, bothers me when people do that. your should either find a different word or write out the word and put the poem in explicit (Sp?) |