Comments : Animon

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    The ending didn't seem to fit that well but it was pretty good. I really like the dark feel to all of your poetry. Also one thing that bothered me is that you wrote C***** which ,sorry, bothers me when people do that. your should either find a different word or write out the word and put the poem in explicit (Sp?)