This poem is really different. But i really like it! Your an awesome writer! keep writing!
-Michelle

Well written how ever this line:

My realization isn't real realization

made my head spin. is there any other way you can word that? I like the first staza, to me its the best part of the poem. I love your work and I gues I should stop in more often and leave you some comments, because despite your wonderful words you're a bit laking in comments, it's sad. I really hate when that happens lOl. anywho I',m off to reply to other R/R/C's *hugs*

Love yeh