Rebel child

by WithoutASoul   Jul 12, 2006


Foolish misunderstood child,
you've taken a bad path.
I know beneath your hostile mind
you have a childish heart.

There's no need to act like a fearless adult,
bullying and taking charge.
Don't be afraid to cry and realease all your hatred.

Foolish misunderstood child,
hesitate and see what you've become and what you'll be.
Consider your future, the one you've created, a life full of conflict.

Your clever,
your smart.
use it to your advantage!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    Your style reminds me of one of my favorite writers sylvia plath.You should look her up.Umm... try looking at her pomes Daddy and CUT.There very deep dark and devistateing.

  • 18 years ago

    by EmilyAnn

    I like it :] :]
    its ahh interesting!!
    u shud make sum moreee
    soo i cant comment them!

  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    I can really relate to this , I work with kids who have taken a wrong path. very good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    This may sound gay, but its like u wrote this 2 me... an i kno u probably didnt but its gud i felt this way... luv it

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