This may sound gay, but its like u wrote this 2 me... an i kno u probably didnt but its gud i felt this way... luv it

I can really relate to this , I work with kids who have taken a wrong path. very good poem.

I like it :] :]
its ahh interesting!!
u shud make sum moreee
soo i cant comment them!

Your style reminds me of one of my favorite writers sylvia plath.You should look her up.Umm... try looking at her pomes Daddy and CUT.There very deep dark and devistateing.