by Michael Jul 12, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The darkness surrounds me |
Leaves off with a question. Like that. So some great visual descriptions. Iffy flow in some places. Liked how this left off with a question and had this raw sense about it. |
Nice job 5/5 |
I give it a 6/5...lol...but I liked it |
by samantha
That is a damn good poem very visual and i can see every thing u explain really awsome 5/5 |