Awwwww sweetie =(
your last stanza was so touching and teary =(

so emotional. I loved every line...
"love doesn't look at my way anymore
no matter just how hard i have tried
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I love these 2 line. although the whole stanza is very great! the poem overall is so adorable,really.

now back to love poems?? I guess you wanted to impress me more,hehe! but thats too great and fascinating! very well written and enjoyable to read ;)

Keep up the excellent work of yours
LoV
NemO XxXxXxXxXxXxX

I can relate to your poetry, once again very good writing.

Hey darl a very touching piece. very well written.xx

Awwww omg! so touching got a tear in my eye too... 5/5...can relate to ur poem....amazing poem..a great ending ....5/5

takcare

The concept of this someone behind is done very well.

great writing
peace
shobhana

Very well done poem ur such a gr8 poet!!

Wow! its so touching and wat else?????? its wonderful dear..... i loved it. well done. 5/5

luv

A short but perfect poem, i love it i understand it very well are ur words are fabulous xox sam

Very well written. I like the different use of rhym scheme. Very unique. Excellent job.

This poem was rele good i liked it alot

Very touching and nice. its nice to see how you express the person and thigs inside you.

Excellent piece! The flow is flawless and the poem shows your emotions very clearly---5/5 Beautiful work

This is so beautiful and sad. Your writing inspires me. Your expression comes through so strong. Being sad and lonely is very hard. Yet the way you write is just beautiful. Excellent

Nitin
I read this a second time. Everytime I reread something of yours I find new meaning behind your words.......what a painful piece you have penned. the pain and dispair brings tears to my eyes.

now all these creatures are part of me
yet no one has ever been satisfied
love doesn't look at my way anymore
no matter just how hard i have tried

These lines I hope have changed for you somehow. Excellent writing as always.
Love you yaar