I know you wrote this a while ago....but I really like it. The green monkey was the metaphor, that was really creative, and the poem was so true about racism. Great Job!

I so totally aggre with you and it's really sad :( I lke how you portayed it in a kinda funny way, with the monkey...it juts gets the message out better i think. Great work!
xxDeLie

That poem was excellent! I liked how you used the monkey to get your point across. Yeah, I agree with the rest that recism is very damaging and everyone should be able to get along no matter what you look like on the outside. 5/5 keep it up!

Very sad. I like how you portrayed it. this was a good poem, good job 5/5